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TR pogled odozgore konecno 3000 by SBEP TR pogled odozgore konecno 3000 by SBEP
Finaly done after 2 sleepless nights.
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Mojo-Smileyface Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This looks really proffesional, I like the use of red and the pose you have Lara in at th right there!! Nice work!! :)
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Ty very much, far away from proffesional this is my first collage ever, didnt think it would turn out this good if i can say so myself :D,anyhow its a miss, the contest is about depicting Lara and i made a poster :D :D :D
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somehow really good. thing that disturbs me is, that lara is much out of sight, her silhouette covered by the bow.
maybe simply put the bow and quiver to the other side of her back, aswell the ice pick to the right hand.
the hairs cover much of the face, maybe try to show more of it.
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Trust me i moved Lara left and right till i was satisfy with the position she was in, which is right there, her right hand is keeping pressure to a wound on the stomach, that`s why i put the ice pick in the left, as for the bow mb i can spin it from left to right to see how that plays out...
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the hand that pressures cant be seen, not even a hint of. u should put at least fingers over her stomach or so, that indicate this.
and yes, bow to the other side, would show more female form.
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what will you say now... :)
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hm... better. but im not content yet.
she should look more in beach direction. and the silhouette isnt so well recognizeable yet.
id do the letters smaller too.

but thx for noting me ;) and dont worry, i always have critique, no matter the (famous) artist and no matter how good the pic/art is being seen.
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I dont mind the critique, its just that im really tired of correcting this pic, you are right bout the letters dou and for Lara looking at the beach not true although its not true size when u click to enlarge the image so u cant see that she actually is looking at the viewer :) but tnx for the feed back that made this pic that much better...
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yeah i understand. one time, it has to be finished, no matter if perfect or not. new shores await the restless mind of the artist ;)
its a very good pic. good luck for the contest!
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